Tell me about your resolution.
Dear Hiring Manager,
In the beginning, my career objective was scattered with full of purposes and trying to obtain experiences, so I did a lot of jobs with my avidity and motivation and tried to seek the best pathway and my goal to achieve in future. It was so intricated to know that it is not so easy to find out the certain goal or interest in my life but finally, I did and still I am pursuing this. Before I realized my life towards the main goal, I was grinding and my life was crumbled away through a lot of experiences and circumstances. But it was obvious that without experience, it was tough to get real enthusiasm towards the ultimate goal which was teaching English language and this path became my purpose and I completely dedicated my life and passion towards it to reach at superior level one day.
Throughout my experience, I have known avalanche of things which changed my life, and it taught me choosing the right path or understanding own capability towards the goal which was an arduous and meandering process. However, it made me assiduous, punctual, courageous and loyal towards my work to accomplish each and every situation. I experienced that language is not only the communication tool, it is the phenomena which is crucial in the present days to build a good career on almost every platform.
Whenever I chose my pathway to go ahead towards English teaching career and I have garnered insurmountable experiences and learned people’s enthusiasm towards language and what motivates them to learn the language faster. It is essential that before teaching people, we need to realize some certain things which are teaching is not only about sharing knowledge with students, it’s beyond this. It’s so important to create a friendly environment and try to understand what way they need to learn English because language learning is a sinuous process and it needs the patience to be learned. So I had gone through all of these circumstances and when I teach students, I feel that what method they need to learn it faster and get a natural accent.
So my first teaching experience was at home and afterwards, the online platform, I enjoyed both of ways and learned several techniques to teach students and keep them motivated. Whenever I started teaching at home, this was so astounding experience for me and made me go forward. Time goes by and I got an online platform and this was another enthralling experience for me and I was connected to all over the world. This online platform changed me drastically and in the initial time, I have been getting students on the online teaching websites very slowly and people didn’t know me but after few weeks, time falls down and people started to recognize me well, they needed me more and loved my methodology. Even though they were spreading my class by telling their friends and neighbours and sharing my website on social media and it made me pursuing my career with my all accomplishments and It has been going on until now.
In a nutshell, I would like to add something about my entire journey until now on English teaching career which is without love, passion and hope towards work and sharing the love and experience and helping others, there is no accomplishment in life.
One day one of my students from Germany, Berlin told me about Berlitz English teaching organization and I looked forward about it online. Finally, I got some job vacancies on Berlitz organization and it gave me hope towards my goal. So I am looking forward to getting an opportunity to face an interview and I will get a chance to light up my skills and avidity towards my goal. Also, I will be highly obliged and grateful for this. You can reach me at (+91) 9677448922 and sumitsinha608@gmail.com .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, so, still, thus, well, as to, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 7.48453608247 361% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 51.0 5.05154639175 1010% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 97.0 32.9175257732 295% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 26.3917525773 284% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3123.0 937.175257732 333% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 651.0 206.0 316% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79723502304 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05120793913 3.78020617076 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88268289027 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 127.690721649 237% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465437788018 0.622605031667 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 960.3 290.88556701 330% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.13402061856 230% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8131452844 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.954545455 76.5299724578 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5909090909 16.8248392259 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 7.41237113402 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107973383695 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409748669993 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049413966478 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0544224083927 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526349121612 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 41.2886597938 310% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.