Some people prefer travelling alone when they experience a new country or culture, while others prefer having some company. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
new Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times new Roman";color:#4D5968; mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:RU">Nowadays, more and more people give privilege to travelling on their own. According to some, this is the best way, as, they argue, that people will be able to have a better understanding of a new culture and make acquisitions more easily. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows it will be argued that travelling with a company can make the journey more memorable and straighten relationships. new Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times new Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: RU">
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new Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times new Roman";color:#4D5968; mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:RU">Firstly, it is crucial to have a nice company while travelling, as this will enable people to make great memories. people make the most out of their journey, by sharing the experience of exploring new countries and places with their friend or family members. For instance, last month my friends and I visited our neighboring country and enjoyed ourselves from trying to dance their traditional dances. Moreover, a loved one can give a special meaning to even an ordinary place. new Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times new Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: RU">
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new Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times new Roman";color:#4D5968; mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:RU">Secondly, people can get closer to their companion while travelling together, as this will give them an opportunity to spend ample time together as well as get to know each other better. Modern life leaves little time for socializing, since everyone is mostly engaged in their daily life pattern. Therefore, sometimes taking vacations is the only possible option to interact with friends and relatives. In addition, it is surprising how much people can learn about each other while touring. new Roman","serif";mso-fareast-font-family: "Times new Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:RU">
new Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times new Roman";color:#4D5968; mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:RU">In conclusion, it was demonstrated that having a company during travel can result in an unforgettable journey and stronger relationships. Though some believe that traveling alone will lead to integrating into a new culture and finding new friends, still, in my opinion, people should have a companion while travelling. new Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times new Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: RU">
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2786.0 1615.20841683 172% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 8.39156626506 5.12529762239 164% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.8145247314 2.80592935109 421% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53313253012 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 793.8 506.74238477 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.60771543086 149% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 167.285650577 49.4020404114 339% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.733333333 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930530110287 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675454249159 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633760349565 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691562137055 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035363200851 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 13.0946893788 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -18.53 50.2224549098 -37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 31.38 12.4159519038 253% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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