The civic centre will be planned to changr. there are two maps: one is the existing and the other is the plan for now
The two maps display the differences between the existing and the future layout of the civic centre.
Overall, it is obvious that some locations of buildings will be altered or removed and some buildings will be added.
The two car parks are located at the junction of A.Avenue and C.street and the junction of A.avenue and D.street.A theatre will substitute for the former car park , whereas the latter one will be replaced by a hotel or restaurant and shopping centre.The concert hall along the A.avenue and the shopping centre along the D.street and beside the original car park remain the same as before.The library at the junction of D.street and B.avenue will be removed.At that junction , there lies an exhibition hall , which will be shifted to the original location of the library.
A council office standing along the B.avenue will be moved to original location of the exhibition hall,and open park and an underground car park will be constructed there instead.
- The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctorsand other workers in seven countries in 2004. 61
- The table below gives information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The table shows the amount of money given in aid of technology ofdeveloping countries by charities in the US, EU and other countries from 2006 to2010. 73
- Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Avenue
... parks are located at the junction of A.Avenue and C.street and the junction of A.aven...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...d the junction of A.avenue and D.street.A theatre will substitute for the former ...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... will substitute for the former car park , whereas the latter one will be replaced...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...hotel or restaurant and shopping centre.The concert hall along the A.avenue and the...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...inal car park remain the same as before.The library at the junction of D.street and...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
...f D.street and B.avenue will be removed.At that junction , there lies an exhibitio...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
....avenue will be removed.At that junction , there lies an exhibition hall , which w...
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Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...junction , there lies an exhibition hall , which will be shifted to the original l...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...original location of the exhibition hall,and open park and an underground car park w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03726708075 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63839849888 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.087707832 43.030603864 446% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.75 112.824112599 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.25 22.9334400587 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192164556391 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124100044331 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0123758852075 0.0843802449381 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124100044331 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123758852075 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.2329268293 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.