COMICS
The reading and the audio are both about comics medium and if they are from America or not. This includes newspaper comic strips and comic books.
On the one hand the reading says that the comics art comes from the USA so all the comics around the world are influenced by the Americans comics style. This is because the first comics than was successfully commercialized was Hogan’s Alley on 1890’s who lives in New York and has the usual American way of living at that time, it was written by an American cartoonist. Even more Superman created on 1930’s, the first popular action comic that is still being printed was created in America. And this American way of comics have influenced the the way of write comics all around the world. On Europe by Disneys Comics which are the most popular in that continent and on the Japonese way of comics called manga.
Secondly, the audio told us that there were other comics older than Hogan’s Alley created in the United Kingdom and Switzerland on 1790’s. Even more, Hogan’s Alley told the story of an inmigrant living in New York. Also Eventhough Superman, which was created by a Canadian cartoonist that lives in the USA, is very popular around the world, in Belguim was created Tintin which is very popular around the world and it was created on 1922. So the comics have influenced not only from the USA, it also has influences from different parts of the world.
In conclusion the reading and the audio have different points of view but all of them try to argue where the influences of the comics comes from.
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- ORGANIC FOOD 73
- ecoturism 3
- Some students prefer classes with frequent discussions between the professor and the students with almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with many lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to su 60
- Some students prefer classes with frequent discussions between the professor and the students with almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with many lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to su 73
- Comics medium. Summarize the main points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the reading passage. 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... American way of comics have influenced the the way of write comics all around the worl...
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Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... American way of comics have influenced the the way of write comics all around the worl...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 689, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ost popular in that continent and on the Japonese way of comics called manga. ...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that there were other comics older than Hogan's Alley created in the United...
^^
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ory of an inmigrant living in New York. Also Eventhough Superman, which was created ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'comics'' or 'comic's'?
Suggestion: comics'; comic's
...ry to argue where the influences of the comics comes from.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 276.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4808100924 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 145.348785872 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463768115942 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.236869484 49.2860985944 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06452816374 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437202578762 0.272083759551 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236620179617 0.0996497079465 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16982475464 0.0662205650399 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320778931637 0.162205337803 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167422548412 0.0443174109184 378% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.