Excess sugar consumption leads to too many health related problems .It is often argued that the government is solely responsible to put a cap on the sugar distribution to the people , so they can wisely use it . However, others reckon that it is up to the individual concern on limiting the sugar intake, considering their health benefits.
Undoubtedly, Sugar is considered to be one of the vital ingredient in most of our food preparations.Regardless of the age , people are highly addicted to any food stuff which is particularly sweet in taste. However , individuals often forget the fact that the kind of health related problems , it adds/ associates to their lives by consuming sugar in heavy doses . To exemplify,in a recent survey published by a famous magazine ‘Times’ it is said that there are more than 23% of people are suffering from hazardous health issues such as Obesity, Diabetes ,cardiovascular diseases and cancer too in some cases by consuming high amount of sugar In their day to day lives.Hence , people should understand the consequences and adapt a healthy life style by including sugar free products in their diet , and by performing regular health checks ups.
On the other hand, Government also can pitch in and take some necessary steps in regulating the prevailing health issues among the people caused by consuming surplus sugar . Arranging a cap or limit the sugar distribution to the people would subside this problem to an extent, and also , by promoting the possible health benefits people can acquire by reducing their sugar intake.Furthermore, by campaigns can be organized to create an awareness regarding the plausible dangers associated with over consumption of sugar.
To conclude, In my opinion, though government can play a crucial role in managing and shaping the people lives, it is finally up to the individuals thought process, on how they want their lives to be carried out ,especially in terms of health.
- In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in the water, so people think they should be banned.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people think that schools do not do enough to teach young people about how to look after their health.To what extent do you agree or disagree. 92
- Some people believe that sleeping is ony the relaxing method which allows people to get enough relief.Others believe that physical activities such as playing games and exercises also provide enough relaxation.Discuss both the views and provide your opinio 84
- Some people say that holding sport competitions cause many troubles, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- As countries develop, people tend to buy more and more cars. Do you thing the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment? 95
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1674569745 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569182389937 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.089983234 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.375 106.682146367 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.75 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.625 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204478162262 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106044608518 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505490328604 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139029554392 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699679202856 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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