To learn effectively, children need to eat a healthy meal at school.
How true is this statement?
Whose responsibility is it to provide food for school children?
Based on different researchers, a healthy food plays an important role in the life of people specially at educational system.
There is this belief that students need to have suitable meal to enjoy learning. I completely agree with this idea. Because, There is a proverb says that "a healthy mind in a healthy body". It seems to me that if all the prerequisites for effective learning are provided, we can nurture successful generation for the future. For instance, an ideal meal which includes several kinds of nutritious such as proteins, vitamins, minerals and fresh fruits would be helpful.
We must consider a significant role for either parents or teachers for reaching to this goal. For example, if parents and tutors collaborate with each other, not only we will have clever students, but also we can experience up to date technology in scientific promotion.
In brief, as far as my view, each person in family and at school as small societies are responsible for having good upbringing in order to reaching to developed country in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hing to developed country in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, in brief, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07954545455 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8464264605 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698863636364 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5487799839 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206122810387 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763542107173 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321665362726 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108792434393 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036383366415 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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