You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr. Adam
I am writing to you to request a week off from work in order to finish my Diploma in Advanced Accounting Techniques. As you already know I have been taking classes for a year in order to expand my knowledge in the field of finance and to learn how to use modern Accounting software. And since I have attended all the required, I can now sit the final exams to finally get my degree. Consequently, I find it extremely difficult to thoroughly go through all the study materials while going to work for 8 hours every day.
Upon my return I am planning on staying at the office for an extra hour every day for a month in order to catch up on all the work I would have missed. I can also work Saturdays if that's permitted by The Human Resources Department. I will also happily teach my colleagues the newer techniques I have learned to help them achieve their tasks more efficiently.
I would like to point out how much this degree will benefit me as an accountant and consequently will also benefit the company. Because the company currently uses basic accounting software that produce errors and inaccuracies, knowing how to create and use cutting edge software will be an absolute advantage and can assist the whole department in updating the database.
I look forward to hearing your positive response.
Yours sincerely
Mary Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ve missed. I can also work Saturdays if thats permitted by The Human Resources Depar...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lso work Saturdays if thats permitted by The Human Resources Department. I will a...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...chieve their tasks more efficiently. I would like to point out how much this d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70711297071 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68034008389 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640167364017 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3408670898 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.272727273 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178445822814 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627489372998 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398638447838 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893165553765 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488665418161 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.