Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter to display my intent on getting admitted to one of the popular courses of your renowned college. The name of the course I am interested in is Project Management Office in Government projects.
I would like you to let you know that I am eligible as per the criteria listed in your website for getting admission into the course. My highest educational credential is a Masters degree in Information Technology. Also, I am currently working for the last 5 years as Project Manager, Planning Commission of Government of Bangladesh. As a part of my job, I was selected to participate in a course of project management and also we got a list of college from which we can select a college. Your college is in the top of that list.
I was always been curious to learn in an English speaking country and also in a multicultural environment which will help me to run government projects better than before. I understood that your college runs this course targeting government employees from different countries of the world. That is why I am very much interested in joining in your college and learn from other country's culture and styles of managing project, in turn, enriching myself.
I am looking forward to hearing from you so that I can start processing my final application.
Yours faithfully,
Abed Joy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82403433476 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88925552723 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579399141631 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8070263263 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215874348763 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790148209494 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474294873175 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122509856921 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357334967834 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.