The depicted maps of the centre of Islip town provide in formation about the current town and the developing plan of it in the future. As can be observed, there will be some modifications and improvements, while, some of the features will stay the same like school, a number of shops and park.
At the outset, the countryside and some shops just under it on the northen side of current town will be deminished and replaced by Bus station, Shopping mall, Car park and new housing. Moreover, the main road will be used by pedestrians and we will have Dual crriageway all around the town instead. Furthermore the size of park on the east of town city will be cut and allocated to the new housing.
Overall,in the future plan of the town, some additional new housing is considered bringing about more urbanized to the south of the town in particular and these modifications and adjustments lead to making the town bigger with more facilities.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 67
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... modifications and improvements, while, some of the features will stay the same like school...
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Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...crriageway all around the town instead. Furthermore the size of park on the east of town ci...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...d allocated to the new housing. Overall,in the future plan of the town, some addit...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the south of the town in particular and these modifications and adjustments lead...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71515151515 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71469151948 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4962770622 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115296037942 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678907176535 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674214195551 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869484466809 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273318887739 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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