Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the present scenario, feminism is challenging role male dominance in many fields. However, how well the women are thriving in their jobs is the topic of discussion now. This essay will agree to view point that women are equally competent to men.
To being with, in past, women are permitted to involve only to the household and child nurturing works as they have motherly nature towards fellow being by birth but now it has changed a lot. They are now able to handle any task and in some cases, they even performing better than men. The best suitable example is outstanding performance of girls in education. After women are allowed to study in India, my country, many offenders are surprised by seeing the grades of them which are equally comparable to men and some time they even achieved better than gents. Thus, it is be noted that women are not only successful in looking homes but also capable in doing other jobs.
Another area where they laid mark is at performing the works which are physically tough. It is general misconception that women are not as strong as men because of their physical posture. However, this has proven wrong with recent emergency of women in to the armed border security jobs such as army and navy. This is because for the choice of these roles, they have to build muscular body and stamina as such of men. Therefore, It is proved that women are strong enough able to handle any job.
To conclude, It is generally considered by many that women are less competitive than men based on past beliefs but they proved their strengths in various fields which changed the thinking of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69473684211 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35055247823 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6874063436 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204637987165 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655986706144 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508835462599 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124347522668 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345457797013 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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