The media should include more stories which report good news. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that news coverage should focus more on good news. While I
partly agree with this view, I also consider that bad news should continue to be reported
when necessary.
There is a good case for believing that good news is under-reported. It is rare to read a
positive story which makes front page headlines. Yet it is surely essential that the
public are kept informed about some of the good things which are happening in the
world. In recent years, for example, breakthroughs have been achieved in the treatment
of certain types of cancer. It should form part of editorial policy to carry stories such as
these, because they have a positive impact on public morale.
However, it would be misguided to introduce restrictions on the reporting of tragic
news events. Civil wars and natural disasters, for example, may sadden viewers and
readers, but they are an unfortunate reality of the world today. While sensational
journalism may at times exaggerate, it is important for the public to keep abreast of
these happenings in order to have some informed knowledge of contemporary issues.
Sadly, for instance, there is relatively little good news to report on the host of
environmental issues facing the world. If these problems are ignored by the media, in the
interests of reporting cheerful news, then the chances will surely increase of an
ecological crisis. The media must act as watchdogs in the fight against climate change
and environmental degradation.
In conclusion, while I agree that important positive messages should be given more
publicity, it is also necessary for the media to continue reporting all the significant bad
news in the world today.
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...hat the public are kept informed about some of the good things which are happening in the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18279569892 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78820335128 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7224556482 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290755198377 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100659459349 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753115987704 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766030921354 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673119928528 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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