Some people say that relationships should be based on honesty and trust. Others believe that it is sometimes necessary to be dishonest in order to maintain harmony.
Which approach do you consider to be better in relationships and why?
The type of relationships we have with a partner, friends, parents, children, relatives, office-colleagues and neighbors are all different. Honesty and trust, however, are the key elements for long-term relationships in almost all areas of life. In my opinion, without these qualities, a relationship can only be based on mistrust and suspicion.
Trust develops gradually throughout a relationship, yet dishonesty can easily destroy this trust. For example, if a person lies to someone, it is probable that the other person will eventually realize they have been deceived and as a result, they will be less likely to trust that person in the future. On the contrary, relationships in which people are honest with one another are likely to remain strong and healthy.
Being honest, on the other hand, does not mean people should always say what they know, think or feel. It is, for instance, sometimes better to say nothing than to say something that might hurt another person’s feelings. Also, some people believe that in certain social situations it is better to be dishonest in order to avoid embarrassing another person and to maintain harmony. However, although this hides conflict in the short term, this conflict still exists and may be expressed in a destructive way at a later stage.
In conclusion, because harmonious relationships are important, people must find ways to live with others and to deal with the conflicts that are an unavoidable part of life. Dishonesty is only a short-term solution that will eventually destroy any type of relationship.
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- The historical building in your place is in a bad condition. Write to the local government.In the letter, you should:•why the building important is•what its present condition is•what action must be taken. 78
- Some people say that relationships should be based on honesty and trust. Others believe that it is sometimes necessary to be dishonest in order to maintain harmony. Which approach do you consider to be better in relationships and why? 84
- Some people say that relationships should be based on honesty and trust. Others believe that it is sometimes necessary to be dishonest in order to maintain harmony. Which approach do you consider to be better in relationships and why? 77
- The historical building in your place is in a bad condition. Write to the local government.In the letter, you should:•why the building important is•what its present condition is•what action must be taken. 78
- The historical building in your place is in a bad condition. Write to the local government.In the letter, you should:•why the building important is•what its present condition is•what action must be taken. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a destructive way" with adverb for "destructive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...flict still exists and may be expressed in a destructive way at a later stage. In conclusion, be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24110671937 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00609971111 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3977502569 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.25397266985 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349378913309 0.242375264174 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116686657784 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705582146903 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184891098114 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721372172558 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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