Carbon footprint
In this set of materials, the author and the speaker are discussing the effects of global warming adverse on city life which has high footprint level. They are largely discordant with each other while the writer argues that is not easy green urban life, because there are many of obstacles. But, Speaker offers some logical solutions in order to overcome footprint problem. He has three reasons; city dwellers use bike or tram decrease carbon foot print, city dwellers produce to use more renewable energy, and people can simply grow food in major cities.
Firstly, the city population increase randomly day by day that has some serious results. The carbon foot print is examined higher level in major cities. Many of trucks get food from rural area to big cities while they have high contamination over the enviroment. People can live outside of the city, but it is not a permanently solution. They have to achieve food for feeding family. So, they use a car to go shopping centre or mall. Instead of using the car, city dwellers use bike or walk to go shopping so that decrease carbon foot print.
Secondly, City people use more renewable energy, and they can produce easily it. Technology has undergone a milestone and it supply many of solutions.For example, they use minimizing wind tribune on the roof or use solar panel. If they are patient, we can reduce carbon footprint day by day.
Finally, the author claim that it is impossible grow plant in major cities, because of adequately soil and area. Contrary of this, different solutions are found in urban life. For example, people, who live in new york, try to grow plant taprooms, balcony and front of the window. They can use miniature plant so that grow food.
To sum up, modern world people simply pass many problems and obstacles thanks to technology. Old fashion thinks has no connect with 21. century.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-07-07 | Cookiedough | 75 | view |
| 2019-03-30 | arizaturan | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 320.0 270.72406181 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.871875 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39455559225 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.381343124 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.95 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143817536786 0.272083759551 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441053495793 0.0996497079465 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080456199338 0.0662205650399 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770200918505 0.162205337803 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689044897873 0.0443174109184 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.3589403974 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.