Animal species are becoming extinct as a result of human activities on land and sea. Why has this happened? What is the solutions?
It is true that human activities on terrestrial and marine should be held accountable for extinction of animals. Reasons for this vary and steps need to be taken to tackle the problem.
There are several reasons why the actions of human pose a danger to endangered species. Water pollution resulting from human activities is of the main reason why animals are on the brink of extinction. For example, product processes discharge chemical waste into the ocean, which can poison animals. Furthermore, environmental degradation caused by deforestation and the industrialization of agriculture act as a catalyst for wildlife extinction. For instance, lowland rainforests have been cleared and hideous high-rise buildings were constructed to meet the demand for the growing human population. If these actions are not prevented, animals will lose their natural habitats.
However, the issue described above is not intractable. The simplest measure would be that the governments should impose an official ban on irresponsible disposal of industrial waste. If this policy are adopted, factories will be forced to install waste treatment systems that are environmentally friendly. Another remedy is that national and local authorities should prioritize expenditure on the creation of more wildlife reserves and elimination of poaching to protect endangered species in their natural habitats. For example, the government should provide funding for expending more zoos and safari parks where animals can have freedom to roam, to exhibit their natural behavior and to breed.
In conclusion, extinction of animals is attributable for several actions of human. This problem can be handled by adopting the above mentioned solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66795366795 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07620015749 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4368812342 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166851596543 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605731000147 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680779095118 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113518346802 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041212402222 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.