adults independence from their parents or living with their families for a longer time
Adulthood is a very important period in our lives. Adulthood is known to be a transition period in which adults would want to try new things in life and wouldn't like anyone to interfere. Many adults want to be independent from their parents as soon as possible. Others don't. In my view i would prefer adults to live with their families for a longer time for many reasons.
First, living with family for a longer time would strengthen the relationship between the family members. Having a strong relationship with parents is a precious thing. Since parents would always be the ones to go to when you are feeling down and when you lack support from the society. For example, i remember when i first moved out from my parents place, i felt the emptiness and loneliness in my new flat and every now and then i used to go visit them to get some support and to remind myself that these people have got my back no matter what.
Second, you get to learn more about life from your parents experience. Everyone has done things that they wish they never did and things that they wish they did. Living with your parents for a longer time would give you the chance to learn more about what to do and what not to do. It would make things much easier to handle. For example, i remember the time when my dad told me how much he regrets not joining a boxing club when he was young. This tought me how to pursue anything i want in life as soon as i can.
Third, you can get a chance to help your parents when they are old or sick. Paying back a small portion of that enormous effort they did raising you up, would be the greatest deed someone can ever do. For example, i remember how i used to help my mum in everyday's duties when she was sick. I am so proud of myself that i could help my mum and make her life easier when she didn't have enough strength. However, if i wasn't living with my family back then, i couldn't have been able to help.
For these reasons i would recommend adults to live longer with their parents when possible. I would like to add that the society should do more effort to raise awareness about how important it is to take care of your parents as long as you can.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, third, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2922705314 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15143640752 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45652173913 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3322396374 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.619047619 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2380952381 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346351702801 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113219730127 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149786139032 0.0737576698707 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223377741228 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118914082451 0.0645574589148 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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