TPO EXTRA2
A person should never make an important decision alone.
Decision making is a significant process in everyday life and it is important for people to make the right decision in critical situations. It comes as no surprise that efforts to finding the best ways of making decision have been always among the top priorities. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether a person should never make a decision alone or not. I, to a great extent, concur with the idea that people should not make their decision by themselves. The rationale behind this thesis will be elaborated by the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point that makes me hold this belief is that one individual cannot see all the negative and positive points of a decision by himself and it may lead to wrong decision for him. It goes without saying that a person cannot evaluate all the sides of a decision by himself since every person is expert in one special area and do not have much experience and information about other aspects. Consider a doctor encountering with a financial problem. Although he is really expert and professional in his major, but maybe he cannot evaluate a financial problem by himself; therefore, it is crucial for him to advice with someone else who can guide him in the right way.
Another reason deserving some words here is that making decision by consulting with other people save people's time and energy. Without any shadows of doubt, people are experienced many situations during their life and they get many valuable information. The more time ones live, the more experience she/he will attain. Thus, consulting with other people who have similar experience in that matter can save our time and energy. As I remember, when I wanted to choose a university for starting my bachelor period, I consult with one of the staffs of a university who I knew he had similar experience when he was at my age. He researched so much until he choose one particular university for studying. I consulted with him and he provided many invaluable information about various universities. I could gained a lot of information in a few hours. Had I wanted to seek the information by myself, I would loss my time and energy.
Finally, yet importantly, everyone has a unique viewpoint to the problems; therefore, consulting with people help to see the problem from different sides and make the best decision in an efficient way. Perhaps a more specific experience can shed more light on the matter. My cousin is an environmental engineer student at University of British Columbia. When the professors give students assignments, they make some groups and think on the problem with each other. As he said, in their last assignment for a math class, the professor gave them a really difficult problem. Nobody could solve it alone. Thus, they gathered, when one of them gave an idea, they could think thoroughly and gave better ideas. This process helped them to solve the assignment in less than one hours.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned paragraphs, one can soon realize that people should never make an important decision by themselves since not only can they save their time and energy because of similar experiences and different viewpoints, but also consulting with others leads to better decisions.
- Tpo22Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. 73
- TPO24One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part time job. 73
- TPO 25Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities 73
- TPO26It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ jobs. Agree or disagree? 73
- TPO15In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much valuable information', 'a good deal of valuable information'.
Suggestion: much valuable information; a good deal of valuable information
...tuations during their life and they get many valuable information. The more time ones live, the more expe...
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Line 5, column 653, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
... my age. He researched so much until he choose one particular university for studying....
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Line 5, column 737, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much invaluable information', 'a good deal of invaluable information'.
Suggestion: much invaluable information; a good deal of invaluable information
...g. I consulted with him and he provided many invaluable information about various universities. I could gai...
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Line 5, column 801, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'gain'
Suggestion: gain
...ion about various universities. I could gained a lot of information in a few hours. Ha...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ferent sides and make the best decision in an efficient way. Perhaps a more specific experience can...
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Line 7, column 767, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one hour', 'an hour', or simply 'hours'?
Suggestion: one hour; an hour; hours
...em to solve the assignment in less than one hours. In conclusion, contemplating all th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2748.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 552.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97826086957 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77618285445 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48731884058 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 877.5 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1836437657 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.777777778 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212598950125 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575840993323 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758638096864 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144332889857 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999120811249 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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