In my opinion movies and television has a greater impact on natural life. In the past when there were no televisions the life of a human being is not comparable with now. In villages and towns, Men used to have a very natural life by spending their quality time in sharing their experiences, thoughts, opinions with one another. Turning towards women very friendly and learning new things from one another, Even the children had very great time by playing with their pier one's especially in holiday seasons. But, present day is not the same as past because there is no control over the life it is completely changed. On one hand it is movies and another hand it is television. Movies have no content in them, are violent, no message-oriente, some movies may affect teenegers life a lot. Televisions are nowadays smart televisions they can be connected to wireless technology almost can be used as computers. Women are addicted to daily dramas, children are addicted to cartoon channels. Media channels are only for TRP rating they serve only to project more bad then good in the society.
- #7 How do movies or television influence people's behavior? use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 3
- Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.Now get ready to answer the question. You may use your notes to help you answer. 3
- #7 How do movies or television influence people's behavior? use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 60
- tpo 2 integrated writing 34
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uman being is not comparable with now. In villages and towns, Men used to have a ...
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Line 1, column 1064, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ing they serve only to project more bad then good in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 43.0788530466 23% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 407.700716846 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64455669568 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631016042781 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 618.680645161 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8992836603 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0892068934179 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377185526738 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372366149265 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892068934179 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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