In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Eating outside foods by humankind are increasing today, in few countries and they are also has an illness problems related to health.Some people opine that it is mandatory to increase a tax by administration on fast food.This essay will argue why it is must to increase tax.
If governments rose tax on fast food.Firstly,the number of citizens will decrease to go and do not eat fast food or restaurant food because council will give the whole restaurant permission to increase taxes on good and services.For instance, a few years ago in my country, in India, council made a law on the all products including outside food that on goods and service tax will be applicable on the all residence of India, simultaneously plethora of people suffered from disease like asthma and also died due to the health problems by eating outside fast food such as sandwiches, pizzas and many other items which are not good for the health.Hence, today, restaurants or fast foods are preferred by the minority of people around about 30%.
On the other hand, if this rule are not apply by regime.Then, company will suffer.Although, people will have to pay less tax on the fast food, if this rule is stay continue.To illustrate, one fast food company of India, known as Gopal gained lost from the people due to the they did not apply any rule on tax. Therefore, applying rule on fast food then people will not suffer and number of people will eat foods at home than eating outside.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reasons why increasing tax on fast foods is superior by governments. In this essay, I completely agree that governments should work on this method to come out from this type of situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81849315068 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82511414603 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517123287671 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.850188036 49.4020404114 447% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 234.5 106.682146367 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.6666666667 20.7667163134 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.1666666667 7.06120827912 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382939022426 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209014438359 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498915627046 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243348479488 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296341666241 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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