Because of traffic and housing problems in the cities, the government encourages businesses to move to the rural area. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
As the increasing development of urbanization, cities have become crowded and citizens are not content with their life quality. Some people argue that the companies in urban area should be encouraged to relocate to rural regions while I consider it is unwise to move out.
For one thing, the movement of some stores as well as enterprises may result in citizen’s inconvenience. Most of them benefit from prosperous businesses, it means that customers can but whatever they want in cities without long-time transportation. Besides, companies would suffer from deprived income if they move to rural areas. For instance, supermarkets and shopping malls require a great amount of daily consumers, and this condition cannot be met if their locations are too far from city. As a result, local economy would be undermined due to the decrease in business.
From my perspective, most enterprises are supposed to be in cities whereas these businesses which are not directly related to individuals’ daily life could be moved out. The convenience can be preserved if malls and supermarkets are still providing service for citizens. Also, the movement of certain companies can relieve the traffic situation and intensive housing to some extent, since employees would chose to live near their workplaces. Furthermore, the change of location may create a subcenter of the city, allowing the city to expand.
In general, movements of stores and markets which are closely relevant to our daily life will lead to unwanted results. Admittedly, relocation of some businesses can benefit the sever condition of cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...g to some extent, since employees would chose to live near their workplaces. Furtherm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, well, whereas, while, for instance, in general, as a result, as well as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37401574803 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02168624466 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614173228346 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.478668466 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911820775551 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319152059413 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442510328807 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604705427311 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255279775003 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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