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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Sentence: In conclusion, the parent and teacher action are crucial thing in establishing the good attitudes for their children.
Description: The fragment crucial thing in is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
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Sentence Length SD: 5.042 7.5
No. of Words: 257 350
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 257 350
No. of Characters: 1216 1500
No. of Different Words: 136 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.004 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.732 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.167 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 82 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.278 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.042 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.389 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.299 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.482 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5