Do good exam results at school or college guarantee success in life?
Discuss the advantages that a good education can have on your future.
Do you believe that studying hard will bring a better life? (Study Sample AC)
I do not believe that academic achievement equates with a successful life. Obtaining good grades at school is a separate issue from making the most of your life. However, it is hard to see how a person can have a rewarding career without a sound education and appropriate qualifications; for example, a degree.
Well-educated and well-qualified people have more opportunities in the workplace and are more likely to find a well-paid job or be promoted. The result is often more job satisfaction and a better lifestyle compared with people who lack qualifications.
On the downside the...
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to reach successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school both views and give your opinion 85
- Internet users 80
- Migration 80
- Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? 74
- Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them? 80
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