Do good exam results at school or college guarantee success in life?
Discuss the advantages that a good education can have on your future.
Do you believe that studying hard will bring a better life? (Study Sample AC)
I do not believe that academic achievement equates with a successful life. Obtaining good grades at school is a separate issue from making the most of your life. However, it is hard to see how a person can have a rewarding career without a sound education and appropriate qualifications; for example, a degree.
Well-educated and well-qualified people have more opportunities in the workplace and are more likely to find a well-paid job or be promoted. The result is often more job satisfaction and a better lifestyle compared with people who lack qualifications.
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 295 350
No. of Characters: 1358 1500
No. of Different Words: 164 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.144 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.603 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.868 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.438 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.961 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.582 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.077 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5