Little information as a private or general it's depend on what effect on this information to world. There are many information is available namely; scientific research, business, academic world, military, world life animal and population in the word other so on. As per my perspective, some General information provided freely because of positive effect on human and other like missile, weapon guns information to be hide.
To beginning, share information it's means contribute the idea and knowledge and human more keep him self to update individual subject philosophy. Sharing information on scientific research, business and the academic there contain of wisdom what parameter change the data and which is gretest more and less than given them priority and enhance quality of issue. For instance parents taught own children always share item like chocolate, clothing, coin other so on they some buddies helpful to each other. There are some private knowledge can not be share like human identification, air force plane and weapon details. In this day technology rapidly increase but other side fraud, cheat and saber attack, hack website other so on, whatever folks always stay away this things.
Other people rely that, some information share freely like a government job vacancies, what causes of fast food item, new technology evolution and sports event. Online education is valuable information to government or private teacher share freely knowledge.
I pen down saying that, information divided in to two categories private and general but human always aware about some information is fraud or scam. Information to human can update knowledge and take mastery in particular subject and build out future.
- In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet but there is not enough political action to control excessive consumerism and pollution Do you agree 72
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Writing task 1 ielts liz 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...on this information to world. There are many information is available namely; scient...
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Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...on this information to world. There are many information is available namely; scientific researc...
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Line 3, column 762, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... so on, whatever folks always stay away this things. Other people rely that, some...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41417910448 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71427205304 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7773422758 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.916666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314944809893 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123330034196 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440045164984 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196825612861 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466289505681 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.