It is believed that people should work for the same organization during their work lives. Others believed that people should work for different organizations. Discuss both sides.
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;
mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"">There is an increasing trend of switching job in recent years .It is often argued
that people are supposed to be loyal with their company , whilst others
disagree and think that working in another environment will bring them more
benefits. This essay will discuss both points of view before coming to a
reasoned conclusion.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;
mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"">It is clear that working at company provides you with security and stability.
People with get higher salary over time accompanying with promotion, job
satisfaction and social status. In addition, working with your colleagues for a
long time has tied a close connection which can enhance the job efficiency.
Besides, you can be a expert in your field and fell less stress as you are
familiar of what you are doing.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;
mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"">It is undeniable that change another company can get you more challenges. Working
at the same place and doing same tasks every day makes you less competitive and
creative. This comfortable zone may be safe but gradually less attractive which
can lead to work inefficiency.The opportunity in joining in a new company will
help you extend your work experience, social network and discover yourself and your capability completely.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;
mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"">In
conclusion, while most people argued that we should work for only one company
entire life due to its benefit and change to a new company can lead to
unexpected risks, some feel that being a lifelong worker can not try new things
which may help you to achieve your goal successfully .However, the most
important thing to decide whether we should stay or leave to choose to a new
place depends on what you expect from your
company and what you would like to gain while working at that company.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2348.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 7.67320261438 5.12529762239 150% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.1541963769 2.80592935109 362% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 303.806194936 49.4020404114 615% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.428571429 106.682146367 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.7142857143 20.7667163134 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0989446018889 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721768338206 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445894083986 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462039904868 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065374371412 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.6 13.0946893788 280% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.01 50.2224549098 -12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 28.09 12.4159519038 226% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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