Do agree or disagree with following statement? people should something do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.

Sentence: Each person sure needs money and to receive it, sometimes they have to work because to live they need money that possible one of reason people work.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to person and sure
Description: The fragment that possible one is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace possible with adverb

he work cannot loyalty.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and loyalty

Sentence: Accordingly, no seldom he work with feel lazy and job that easy will feel weight.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to with and feel

Sentence: Besides that, he work without feel commitment to himself or company whereas the commitment very important in job.
Description: The fragment he work without is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace work with verb, past tense

Sentence: Their friends at office become cannot like with his or maybe they eschew from his.
Description: The word his is not usually used as a pronoun, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to his

Sentence: It is because seldom discussion about job at their office.
Description: The fragment because seldom discussion is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace seldom with adjective

Sentence: As a result they always be angry by head or customer, his life feel bored and feel burdened while the happen continuous maybe they will fired.
Description: The fragment will fired . is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace fired with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to the and happen
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to will and fired

Sentence: Accordingly, many people are sometimes because burdened job at their office, they return home, they wreak to their feeling for their family such as domestic violence.
Description: The fragment are sometimes because is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace sometimes with adjective

flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.238 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.335 7.5
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 16 in 30
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 320 350
No. of Characters: 1406 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.229 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.394 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.12 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 53 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.238 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.335 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.476 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.342 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.524 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.233 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5