You are employed full-time and also doing a part-time evening course. You are not able to continue the course
Dear Sir,
I am writing to demand some changes in the Spanish course that I have registered in this semester. As you aware I am working in the central hospital as a full-time qualified doctor. According to the recent hurricane which is happened in the north of country, my working schedule has altered and I need to move to the mentioned area to cure injured individuals. Despite my severe passion about this class, the sense of philanthropy do not allow me to stay here while I can be more beneficial in the other part of our homeland. Therefore, participating in this course is impossible for me. I would appreciated, if you could deposit my tuition and allow me to take part the same class in the next semester.
I am looking forward to hearing your kind reply.
Sincerely yours
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 597, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'appreciate'
Suggestion: appreciate
...is course is impossible for me. I would appreciated, if you could deposit my tuition and al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 650.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 139.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67625899281 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76571690535 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676258992806 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6331644498 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8571428571 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154769113155 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590578114404 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744439762485 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831196547569 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831196547569 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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