Write an inquiry letter to your new employer with a suggestion to hire your close friend or relative. In your letter say
– Who is this person?
– Why should your employer hire him/her?
– Suggest what job he/she should be doing.
Dear Mr. Ahmadi,
I am writing to suggest you a professional person who is graduated from university, recently and looking for a prestigious occupation.
Firstly, It should be mentioned that he is my nephew and has great enthusiasm to visit you and introduce himself. I need to emphasize that he finished Ph.D degree with score A from Tehran university in French language.
Regarding to the company has developed relation with France and speaking with their native language has numerous effects on them, I feel great gap in the international relation part and offer to employ a high qualified individual to talk with them. I am sure he will couch your attention, if you permit to visit him and realize his skills.
Since he used to live in France when he was a child and selecting this major at university, he clearly knows those people and can guide us to how work with them in addition to translation.
I would appreciate, if you could set a meeting and converse with him.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need more detail.
Sincerely Yours
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: D
...I need to emphasize that he finished Ph.D degree with score A from Tehran univers...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[3]
Message: Did you mean 'form'?
Suggestion: form
...at he finished Ph.D degree with score A from Tehran university in French language. ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 303, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'visiting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: visiting
...ill couch your attention, if you permit to visit him and realize his skills. Since he u...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eed more detail. Sincerely Yours Sam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, regarding, so, thus, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79459459459 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75662956781 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681081081081 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9822273115 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5555555556 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189782251693 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759871307834 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495871144539 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688458587162 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387256139969 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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