Write an inquiry letter to your new employer with a suggestion to hire your close friend or relative. In your letter say
– Who is this person?
– Why should your employer hire him/her?
– Suggest what job he/she should be doing.
Dear Sandeep,
I am Harry and my Emp ID is 1234. I have joined your esteemed organization a month back and currently allocated on a project which is running under finance domain on java technology. I am such impressed with all the friendly employee related policies along with highly skilled work culture, that i would like to recommend one of colleague (praveen) from previous company and hence writing this letter.
While working on some assignments I observed that there seems to be a shortage of a testing lead which cause to many issues being leaked to production. To overcome this problem i believe my close friend Praveen can play a vital role, as he has a vast and in-depth experience of testing technologies and process.
Having said above, Praveen is also an MBA graduate and has proven his skills in managing a team too. Lastly I would like to add and believe that he could be a valuable asset if we recruit him and it will definitely be beneficial for company's growth too.
I hope to hear back positively from you soon on presenting this opportunity.
Your's faithfully,
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nder finance domain on java technology. I am such impressed with all the friendly...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... with highly skilled work culture, that i would like to recommend one of colleagu...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ompany and hence writing this letter. While working on some assignments I obse...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...any and hence writing this letter. While working on some assignments I observed ...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to production. To overcome this problem i believe my close friend Praveen can pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, lastly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8253968254 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70227962372 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703703703704 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6928863535 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157577981956 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609649803204 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515968465525 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660356306857 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338708269836 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.