To get a good job today it is more important for children to study mathematics and foreign languages than art and music. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is commonly believed by many that to grab a decent job, students should study international languages and mathematics rather than arts or music. I completely disagree with them as I think that a person would easily grab a job if he studies the subjects of his interest and not considering the subjects with higher job scopes.
To begin with, in this modern world, there are plenty of jobs in each field whether it is an academic field of any other field of entertainment. Moreover, nowadays there are certified degree and diploma courses for arts and music as well. Gone are the days, when these fields were just a field of past time or entertainment.
Additionally, these days there are so many talent shows such as Britain Got talent or Rising star, which gave such students to make their name. Once a student enters such international event, it is easy for him to grab a job. Also I believe there are equal job opportunities for art and music students as compared to mathematics and foreign language learners such as music director, music composer and background artist and so on.
Although, there are some countries where mathematics and foreign languages are considered as decent subjects while art and music are just assumed as a hobbies and students are restricted to choose those subjects as their career. so, there is a need of awareness to discourage such thoughts and give rights to students to follow their passion. In short, a successful person is one who is satisfied by his job irrespective of the stream. For example a mathematician who earns eighty thousand rupees a month would not be considered fortunate if his passion is music and he does his job as a duty not with by his heart.
In conclusion, no course would decide carrier of a student, it is the interest of student which could offer him a decent job. I disagree with them who believe that mathematics is a better course to grab a job as compared to subjects such art and music.
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Suggestion: subject
...ter course to grab a job as compared to subjects such art and music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in short, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75510204082 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73433330749 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492711370262 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0579395889 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238381670541 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905059213089 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751943018909 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144394867281 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497377343592 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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