Many people make friends through social sites and chat rooms. Others believe that it is not a good idea to make friends without meeting them face to face. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and relevant examples.
Like many other relationship, friendship is also an essential part of our life. We never hesitate to share our secrets with friends and life would be really impossible without friends but the matter of concern is their place of availability these days. In this modern worlds, we could be a friend to anonymous person within a click of few buttons on-screen. There are no distance barriers, technological barriers left. However, some people believe that it is not a wise decision to be friend with some stranger online, it is advisable to make friends by meeting them face to face. I completely agree with their belief and this essay presents the reasons for my agreement.
To begin with, it is really common to see these days that cyber crimes had increased tremendously in past few years. It is us who deliberately become victims of such crimes. When we look for friends on social networking site or chat rooms, no body will authenticate us with their real identities. For example, when we become friends, we never hesitate to share our personal details, photographs and even our best-loved locations, this has increased the confidence of fraudsters who can blackmail us using our private photographs or stalking us at our favorite restaurants. Moreover, they could misuse our information For an instance, in 2016, cyber police detained a group of people who produces forged identity proofs using the social account details. To a great surprise, A research study conducted by Harvard University in 2010, showed that fifty percents of the accounts were fake and created with the intention of cheating.
Meeting friends online has made us more isolated, we never try to socialize ourselves, we are happy with our virtual friends who we do not know whether actually exists or not. So another prime reason that supports to meet friends face to face is to be little social and come out of our virtual friendship world.
In conclusion, friendship is the most pure relationship in the world. There are many ways by which we could find new friends such as, through our friend circle, university or education institutes or local residence and even online. However, making friends online could be dangerous as some people take advantage of this relationship by cheating poor people online. I agree that we should try to meet friends face to face so that we become social and special part of society do not segregate from others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98275862069 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70290431163 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554187192118 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9087264384 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.388888889 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285077467045 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908102822954 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846598310059 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196706687443 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749364845077 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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