Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problems does it cause?
What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
In Kazakhstan, many people are worried about the impact of supermarkets on local communities. Some economists say that they cause many difficulties to the public. This essay will consider these difficulties and suggest steps to convince people to purchase local products.
The first problem is the closure of small companies. When a supermarket opens in the region, many smaller stores start to suffer from an unequal competition with that mall. Another problem with large businesses is high prices. Once a low rivalry in the market is reached, malls gradually increase the prices for products and services, having no company which could compete with them. The last problem is stale products on sale. Supermarkets tend to buy items of food in large quantities at low prices. They do not refill their warehouses unless all these products are sold out; however, they often become stale after a month.
One of the measures to stimulate people to buy local products is to explain them that local food is fresher. Generally, regional manufacturers supple supermarkets with fresh food more frequently than those at large distances, so consumers are to give a greater preference to domestic products than imported food. Another measure is to local products more available. By lowering taxation for regional manufacturers, the government could encourage more people to buy local products since the manufactures would also reduce their prices.
In conclusion, supermarket cause many problems to the local market by squeezing out small businesses, increasing prices and selling outdated food. However, the government could raise interest in local products by showing how fresher the local food is and lowering the prices for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37638376384 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78113750727 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564575645756 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0780587699 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276406375611 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928341520975 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599360156246 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160613442668 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350846823801 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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