The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008.
Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant.
The diagram compares the uses of renewable energy in America between 1949 and 2008.
There is a stable increment in the total consumption of the renewable energy, which more than doubled in 2008 with about 8 quadrillion units. However, a slight drop happened in 2000, where in it went down to 2 quadrillion units in contrast to 1995.
Amongst the sources, hydroelectric power is the most vital sources in USA; therefore, it has a similar trend with the total consumption, with a stable rise between the beginning to 1974, fluctuating about after three decades. Besides, the wood is also important in the renewable energy, showing a fluctuation around 2 billion units. Meanwhile, the wind and biofuels have less significance in America’s renewable energy, which were not used for the past forty years. Noticeably, the 1990s to 2000s saw a remarkable increment of about 2 quadrillion.
Overall, the hydroelectric power and wood are often used in the USA and renewable energy consumption is consumed increasingly. The other major sources have changed in recent 40 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, therefore, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19540229885 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99627636968 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2932147123 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.444444444 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 5.23603664747 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171142116891 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714457013475 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663015559482 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122356091927 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562033729007 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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