Undoubtedly, Sports events or competitions paves the way for a lot of development within an individual and also to the host nations. It is deemed by many people that organizing sport competitions would bring in many complications to the host nation ,while others deny the statement. This essay ascertains the benefits as well the problems which the host place would possibly encounter during the events.
On one hand, Sports competitions enables to represent the host country at the global platform as well provides ample spotlight for the country to invite any uncertain incidents to take place. To exemplify, recently after the Rio Olympics, Brazil has become more popular country than before. At the same time, considering the massive crowd gets gathered for certain events, there would be high scope for a country to get targeted ,to destroy its valuable resources through Bomb blasts , terrorist attacks and much more.
On the other hand, Sports competitions often aid the nation by uplifting its economy in innumerable ways. Most of the Income earned by country through organizing such events can be used upliftment of poor people by providing them proper education , food and basic amenities for living. Furthermore , money earned can also be used for renovating the country's monuments such as historical places, antique buildings and famous statues,which would bring glory to the country’s heritage ,by attracting not just the people within but also from abroad places. This would benefit the tourism sector which is directly proportional to the surplus in the country’s economy.
To conclude, There are certainly benefits as well the negatives sides of hosting sports in a country, however , the side affects outweigh more as it causes a great threat to the humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32508833922 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81821875565 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625441696113 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4283060257 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110660375777 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504360139547 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625400126239 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732014537183 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447594705229 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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