Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the cooling system in the Four Seasons hotel during my last visit on 4th April.
Initially, the air conditioner was not working properly which led to an uncomfortable vacation. Due to the sudden rise in temperature, my family and I were not able to sleep well at night.
Consequently, we started to contact the receptionist in order to find a rapid solution to our problem. Unfortunately, they take any action, and when I asked for another room as a replacement, I was told that all of the rooms are occupied. Eventually, I realized that I have to open all of the room windows in order to overcome the high temperature which was completely inconvenient for us.
As a result of this, I request to be compensated with a complete refund as a kind of apology. Furthermore, the hotel should make a weekly check to assure that all of the air conditioners are working well. Finally, if the hotel ignored my ticket, I would publish my story on social media which will become a controversial topic in a few days.
Thanks a lot for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Mark Ryan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... room as a replacement, I was told that all of the rooms are occupied. Eventually, I reali...
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ntually, I realized that I have to open all of the room windows in order to overcome the h...
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Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ould make a weekly check to assure that all of the air conditioners are working well. Fina...
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Line 13, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ideration. Yours faithfully, Mark Ryan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74761904762 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04042678112 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652380952381 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7494623619 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0833333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158516514539 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469527724334 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375244982567 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753435594577 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315225201496 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.