In 2006 initially the share price was more than 10 euros,gradually it shoot up to its peak value 31 euros at the end of the year.Then in 2007 cost of share fell slightly and went up and down widely throughout year and finally settled just above 20 euros after that in 2008 the rate of share slowly increasead and climbed to nearly peak point i.e, 30 euros in the middle of year but,later it faced a significant drop of 22 euros, the fluctuation in price experienced even in the next two years,and finally it reached to 12 euros at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , gradually
...y the share price was more than 10 euros,gradually it shoot up to its peak value 31 euros ...
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Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shoots'?
Suggestion: shoots
...ice was more than 10 euros,gradually it shoot up to its peak value 31 euros at the en...
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Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...k value 31 euros at the end of the year.Then in 2007 cost of share fell slightly and...
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Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , later
... i.e, 30 euros in the middle of year but,later it faced a significant drop of 22 euros...
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Line 1, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ficant drop of 22 euros, the fluctuation in price experienced even in the next tw...
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Line 1, column 494, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...e experienced even in the next two years,and finally it reached to 12 euros at the e...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 450.0 965.302439024 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 104.0 196.424390244 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32692307692 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.19343686757 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54362819191 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644230769231 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 134.1 283.868780488 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 104.0 22.4926829268 462% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 450.0 112.824112599 399% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 104.0 22.9334400587 453% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 5.23603664747 420% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107017664813 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107017664813 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107017664813 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.0 13.2329268293 385% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.7 61.2550243902 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.3 10.3012195122 391% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.02 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.68 8.06136585366 145% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.4329268293 481% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 43.6 10.9970731707 396% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 51.0 11.0658536585 461% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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