Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
An Importance of a History
I agree this statement because countries history is an important for them. It gives clues to countries people about future, and There are many reasons for this approach.
First of all, all of world's countries have history, it has different experiences, for example there were wars between countries because they wanted to earn more money or rights, this battles sometimes were about a gold, a petrol, or any kind of expensive things.
Also, some of the countries help to one of a competitor, some of them are being allies to themselves. If i give an example for this situation, it will be The Ottoman Empire in the world war 1, while throguhout war an empire battled to enemies but it was not alone because it's allies which was germany helped it. All of this historical experiences offers us several options which have to make for future.
In addition, historical education is applied by some high school and some universities, this sometimes one lesson and sometimes more than one, some universities teach only history so these are named by historical universities. Big developed countries have to urge historical teaching, This is rule for their universities, and importance of history is known by this type of countries.
In my opinion, taking account of all reasons history of countries is important and it has huge experiences or complaints for preparing their next generations, So students should be choose history .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for example, in addition, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 241.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03734439834 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84869931148 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56846473029 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.324476011 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.888888889 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 5.45110844103 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126861651383 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617546448897 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534118907941 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807024225013 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551342373584 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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