Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Requirement of household tasks
There are several reasons for helping children for doing household tasks by them who developing by their parents.
First of all, children are grown up by family member , especially by mother or father. Their family members always improve their abilities, skills and behaviours. Older people of their parents teach them for everything which about new patterns. These titles are sometimes new technology, sometimes new toy and any others. They have to explain these kind of thing because they have difficulties learning by young.
Also, In the house there are many tasks , and family member have to concentrate better, they have to think clearly, and they may be have to use any kind of tool which is used doing tasks. For example, if the young need to eat meal they need member because they do not know how to cooking. Other example is cleaning room, when there are a lot of dirty space the child would be ill or sick, for this family have to enhance cleanless of room, but early age people of family do not know how to clean so it is erased by eldery.
In my opinion, taking account of all these reasons, older people should help to their youngs as soon as they are able to do so.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, for example, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 1977.66487455 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 215.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66046511628 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30321640175 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586046511628 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1882799086 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223444665324 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848160579042 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835232645456 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164041075598 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692536238323 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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