Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The world is a big place where all people live in it and it has different places where people live, has different kind of foods which eating by human, has various types of things that used by people who want to be satisfied.Some people happy but some others not in the world.
First of all, the world is changing time to time and quickly.Their environments where people's living places such as lakes, rivers, seas are changing often and rapidly.because, these kinds of areas affected by human's activities.For example, human's factories pollute their rivers,seas etc.In these environments, people always be a good condition, because they would be relaxed and they decrease their stresses which caused by their negative environments or other bad activities.When these environments rising down people's satisfactions could be bad.
Also, tools which using by people are changed rapidly.And new things created usually, and new softwares and applications written for people's communications.All these types of materials and products cause people's separations, and they could be far from their relationships because they do not need be together for their connections. For example, before people always be together for talking that about their life, now they use technological equipment such as cellphone,internet etc.Although, they could be with their friends or families they want to be far them, because they do not need close relations.Almost all of these people especially young members of communities could be that condition, and they usually would be in their own spaces and live alone.I think, when people be near their friend or colleagues they more happy than other time.
In addition, new technological tools always use electricity.More electrical things cause more stress, and people who use them always be worry, annoy and they often be a deppression.Improvement of these apps affect people's mental healths.
In my opinion, taking account of all reasons i definitely agree that statement.And, if people want to be a funny and happy they should be far changing world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, i think, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38343558282 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2768734232 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518404907975 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.1344086022 268% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.878371228 48.9658058833 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.5 100.406767564 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.3333333333 20.6045352989 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6666666667 5.45110844103 324% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208824927707 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13225123204 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372711653579 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136209863726 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422993992062 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.1 11.7677419355 264% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 58.1214874552 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 10.1575268817 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.0537634409 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.