People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
There are many reasons why people work such as helping their friends or families, want to be relax, teaching their young workers. It depends on when, where, why people work.
First of all, working is a thing that done by people who work in company or governments offices, study in university or any other schools. All of these activities have different reasons. I think, the first reason is a being a relax. Today, there are several lonely people who live alone in their homes and rooms, all of them have more stresses and they need decreasing their depressions. And, these kinds of people would think various solutions, working is one of the best option.
Also, a family company is one type of company in our world. And, these types of companies and factories have a commission which created by family members. And, they manage different parts of their factories. And, that is usually ruled by their elder members, and It has used for many years in traditional countries.
So, people who is member of their family have to work in their company.
In addition, some working behaviours have well-thoughts because worker of these jobs consider helping other people. For example, some worker would work for their parents who are poor because their parents need an extra money, another example is helping their friend who does not work because have disease which impact their friends badly and negatively.
Moreover, some working facilities decided by governments and courts. And, these types of situations are rules, because people of these facilities made failure which influence others such as traffic crashes, killing other people. And, these people have to work for consuming their a penalties.
Furthermore, a foundation is the type of structure which helping the poor people, teaching children who have not a good living conditions and school environment, these types of people usually live refugee camps because they are refuge. For that, some big countries have many big foundations and volunteers.
In conclusion, taking account of all reasons, I think people work for many good reasons, some of them are necessary, some of them are rules, but the most parts of them are have volunteers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09366391185 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50389431752 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482093663912 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9992372832 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.45 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336184153216 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11455914507 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594339960394 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169253967575 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693234786681 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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