People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today, there are several diseases in the world. People have considered to solve them for years. Although, health companies and countries do much effort some of these problems have not a treatment, and Some parts of them have different solutions.
First of all, a bad eating habits such as fast food, an alcohol, etc are a big problem for people of the world. And, These types of foods are not organic, and their genetic structures are changed by companies for quick producing and more incomes. Especially, children eat more the fast food in their childhood periods, these early years of children effected their later years badly. Parents and governments have to urge their members eating healthly.
Also, in some countries, people doing in any sports activities regularly for their physical and mental health. Because, all sports facilities cause good conditions such as strong muscles and decreasing blood pressures. When people do much sports their body functions and parameters be positive.
In addition, mental disorders are seen in everywhere in our communities and countries. These sick problems effected whole parts of brains of people. Some hospitals and health houses advise travelling to some areas where have a lot of forests and flowers for solving these problems. Because, there are more oxygen and good air in the forest.
Moreover, there are more technological equipment and tools in our era. And, These types of materials cause more stresses on people. They impact people's mental health negatively because when people use these tools they would be alone. Furthermore, some parts of people controlled their functions of body regularly, and they go their doctors and hospitals periodically.
In conclusion, although there are so many solutions people should concentrate their health before being ill. Because, I think health start before being sick.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considered solving'.
Suggestion: considered solving
...eral diseases in the world. People have considered to solve them for years. Although, health compan...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'habit'?
Suggestion: habit
...olutions. First of all, a bad eating habits such as fast food, an alcohol, etc are ...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...reasing blood pressures. When people do much sports their body functions and paramet...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[1]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to travel'.
Suggestion: to travel
...Some hospitals and health houses advise travelling to some areas where have a lot of fores...
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Line 11, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...centrate their health before being ill. Because, I think health start before being sick...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34797297297 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58616795675 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1292544438 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.15 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160197952093 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485158818511 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530487716392 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896458008189 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523893614349 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.