TPO 42 independent writing
Without any doubt workes play a vital role in society development and progress. In my opinion, in somehow workers are backbone of the nation and their satisfiction is necessary for having a developed country. Some people content that workers by having many various types of task are more satisfied, while others assert that when the workers or employees do similar task are satisfide more. Both opposing arguments appeare to be somewhat convincing. However, my personal experience and actual observtion of life agree that having a routin tasks all day long makes workers more satisfide in comparison with having a lot of different works to do. In the ensuing lines I delve into two lines to substantiate my point.
First, in most of the cases, such as companies, factories, and other industrial buildings the worker's duty is hard and challanging. So, I think workers must be especiallized in their unique task rather than doing a lot of different thing. I think being an expert in one field makes them satisfide in comparison with doing many works in a moderete level. For exampl, I work in a company as a resercher. I work on a especific scientific issue and recently i published an article. My focous is on my own work. But, one time my supervisore put many tasks on me, and that was awful. I became dizzy and I don't have any idea of what task must be done first. As you can see, having one task and being expert on that is more satisfying.
Second, if we put just one task on our workers, they will be experts in their work as i said before. Being expert in their duties makes the company improved. For instance, my father work as a worker for an oil company. The company trained all of the workers of the company in their own fields. After six months, the company obtained many advantages effects. The amount of the oil the company extracted increased. These effects gained just because of the workers have only one task to focous on that.
In a nutshell, having just one duty makes worker more satisfied because of two reasons. In summery, by havin one task to do they become an expert in their jobs. Also, being an expert in their work causes the company or factory progress. So, it lead to more salary for workers and it is satisfying. I hope workers can be satisfied, because their have a key role in having a successful and improvement country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...ies, and other industrial buildings the workers duty is hard and challanging. So, I thi...
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Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... them satisfide in comparison with doing many works in a moderete level. For exam...
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Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... in a company as a resercher. I work on a especific scientific issue and recently...
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Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...especific scientific issue and recently i published an article. My focous is on m...
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Line 2, column 600, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nd that was awful. I became dizzy and I dont have any idea of what task must be done...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., they will be experts in their work as i said before. Being expert in their duti...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...for an oil company. The company trained all of the workers of the company in their own fie...
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Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...the company or factory progress. So, it lead to more salary for workers and it is sa...
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Line 4, column 283, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... lead to more salary for workers and it is satisfying. I hope workers can be satisfied, becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, while, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64354066986 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58169443842 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480861244019 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1427011257 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8888888889 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4814814815 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.51851851852 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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