Some p some people think that to lead a successful life University degree is important. Other believe that this is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is irrefutable the education plays an important role in building the successful career of a person. Some people think that graduation does not play a important role living a better life; however,other people reckon that higher education is required for experiencing convenient life. I also agree with this notion.
To set the ball rolling, some people advocate that,degree is not needed for a greater achievement. Firstly,rather wasting money on expensive studies student should get an experience of that field related job.Secondly,other people said their kids in the personal business,hence they think that for this they should not be desired a degree.Thirdly, if a person have good public skills, then it is enough to establish a trusting client base.
on the other hand other, people along with me believe that, a university degree is important for a person to get a good job and career opportunities.Whenever a person go for an interview then he should have an intrinsic knowledge about that field which only can have by college studies.
Furthermore,companies are adopting entirely new strategies to recruit their employees, they always give considerable importance to candidates educational qualifications, while it should be a key factor which helps a person to stand out in a crowd.What is more if a person have a better qualification then he ought to claim for the handsome pay scale.
Summing up,I firmly believe that the individual ought to have a good qualification as well as an intellectual skills for achieving great success in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ualification as well as an intellectual skills for achieving great success in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while, as well as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24899598394 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47237471641 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.919614009 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.375 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.125 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.375 7.06120827912 274% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153900342548 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766232837191 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486694651844 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877646163636 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442101773839 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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