Government should spend money on railways rather than roads .
To what extend do you agree and disagree with this statement?
Government should develop every sector of transportation. Spending the money should be higher in railway should be promoted rather than roads. This essay will agree for the government to spend more on railways.
Railway are the fastest mean of transportation in any nation. It helps to save time of the people. For example if it takes 45 minute by the public or private vehicle then by the use of trains he/she can reach the destination within 20 minutes. Now a days railway are the popular mean of transportation over all Europe, America and Asia. Therefore, railways are consider as one of the popular mean of transportation over the globe.
Electrical railways, magnetic trains are the new invention of government. These trains travel with the speed of 200 km to 300 km per hour. Thus, this will automatically reduce the cost of transportation for the general public, which will also be the cheapest mean of transportation. Trains can carry large no of passengers which can take large no of people from one place to another at the fixed period time. The railway give information about the Train when and at what time it's going to come so the time is accurate 98% of time. Today these railway service are really like by all age people because it provides facilities with less amount of money and it's always in time. So, government is spending more money on railway which will introduce varieties of railway services and nation will get better services
To sum up, I believe that rail way facilities could bring out several of affect in upcoming days rather than the road services. So, government should focus more to spend money in railways service than road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...t to spend more on railways. Railway are the fastest mean of transportation in a...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...each the destination within 20 minutes. Now a days railway are the popular mean of transpo...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...he destination within 20 minutes. Now a days railway are the popular mean of transpo...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...erica and Asia. Therefore, railways are consider as one of the popular mean of transport...
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...rical railways, magnetic trains are the new invention of government. These trains travel with...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...duce the cost of transportation for the general public, which will also be the cheapest mean o...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... transportation. Trains can carry large no of passengers which can take large no o...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...e no of passengers which can take large no of people from one place to another at ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...n about the Train when and at what time its going to come so the time is accurate 9...
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Line 5, column 538, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this railway' or 'these railways'?
Suggestion: this railway; these railways
...the time is accurate 98% of time. Today these railway service are really like by all age peop...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ices and nation will get better services To sum up, I believe that rail way facil...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...y facilities could bring out several of affect in upcoming days rather than the road serv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86315789474 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68450634765 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.6935750346 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264199717808 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888310094718 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998511394531 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192871188064 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117523306645 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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