do you agree or disagree that in modern life youngsters shoud do planning and organization
Life has been changing over the time. The new generation and their thought and life style is different than earlier life. Personally, I believe that, in modern life it is necessary to make plan or organize such things. I feel this way because of two main reasons, which I will explore in the following passage.
First of all, in new life everyone has been changed. Parents and children relationship has been changed.In previous time children wants to stay with their parents, and they know that, it is their obligatory to take care of parents in their elder life. But, youngsters have their different thoughts and ideas about their further life, they wants to be independent and live as per own rules. Nowadays, teenagers can do work after their mature age. They are able to earn their own money. So, they can pay their education expenses or by taking personal loans, they do not need to rely on their parent, This system will be repeat generation by generation. Eventually at the older age they have no support of their children, so it is necessary for them to keep saving for them to live a later life.
Secondly, in modern life everybody wants to live luxurious life. Whereas, inflation is big factor which is become conflict for youngsters to live a stable life. People have to do expenses for their family. For instance, people have many responsibilities in their life. They have to do good set up for their family. Moreover they wants to fulfill their hobbies and do enjoy in their life. So, it is inevitable for them to do plan and organize such things for good future.
However, sometime planned things do not happen. Life will not goes on perceptive only. It is also depend on destiny and luck. So it is not worth to organize all things previously. It is good to live s a life as per own rules and perceptive without any tension about future.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that, there are many factors which are obstacles in life. So it is good to live a life with good planning, it will helpful for live a secure life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65745856354 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47991843039 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483425414365 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.352997473 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.44 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.48 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226711770922 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817289795377 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582803813253 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14936252842 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060343816606 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.