people are very busy to do different things, so they do few things well.
Nowadays, people become all -rounder. They have multiple talent. One person has ability to do many things. Although the plethora of people hold the opinion that people are involving to do various things, so they do very few things precisely, I believe that since people are able to do different things, they are able to do anything well. I feel this way because of few reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, In modern era, people have a lot of work to do. Educated people understand their responsibility very well .So, they never step back to do all things. For example, an individual who is major in family as responsible person has to do job, pay bills and take care of whole family. Although, having this much work together, he never miss any work which is related to his family. This is because people know that their family is their first priority. They do all efforts to keep them family happy.
The second and equally exquisite proof for this assertion is about ability to do different things together. In these days, all people are very knowledgeable to do different things due to advanced technology. The advanced technology has changed the human life. In past days, it is very burdensome to do all the tasks, but nowadays, it becomes very easy. For instance, a mother has too much tasks for whole day. Internet has impetus role in women's life too. They can do shopping, pay light bill, buy books for their children online. So, internet has made their life easier.
However, sometime people become very busy to do numerous things, so they are not able to do all things well. This is because shortage of time or due to any other factors. Additionally, people are always able to find their way to finish their work. Sometime having too much burden makes people unable to do their all work, so do things calmly can resolve this problem.
By the way of conclusion, based on arguments mentioned above, I think that. Even though, people are engaged with too much work, they are able to do things well. This is because they know their duty and technology help them to do things very rapidly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Suggestion:
...do different things, they are able to do anything well. I feel this way because o...
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...h I will explore in following essay. First of all, In modern era, people have...
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Suggestion: .
...nderstand their responsibility very well .So, they never step back to do all thing...
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Suggestion: So
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'misses'.
Suggestion: misses
...aving this much work together, he never miss any work which is related to his family...
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...l efforts to keep them family happy. The second and equally exquisite proof f...
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Suggestion: many
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...internet has made their life easier. However, sometime people become very bus...
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...ngs calmly can resolve this problem. By the way of conclusion, based on argum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70855614973 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36649142784 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494652406417 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1469195323 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7307692308 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.570247198687 0.236089414692 242% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160897985564 0.076458572812 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176110859494 0.0737576698707 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.377318965661 0.150856017488 250% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120360836191 0.0645574589148 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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