What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
President Abraham Lincoln said, “The best way to predict the future is to crease it.”
It is true that if individuals want to succeed in the future, they need to learn new important skills. Nowadays, there are a variety of important skills, such as self-management, networking or solid decision-making, which people should learn to be successful. However, the most important skills people need to learn to achieve their achievements in the competitive world is communication skill because this helps people to build new relationships easier, maintain relationships longer, and work more effectively.
The first reason why good communication helps individuals to be successful is they can build new relationships easily. To be specific, strong communication skills help people to become confident talking to strangers and making new friends, and their friends can support and help them in study or work, which makes it easier for them to be successful in their lives. Taking my friend as an example, Ly is an introvert, and she used to be scared to meet strangers. However, after studying communication skills, she became more extroverted, and she has made new relationships everywhere. Therefore, she has learnt a lot of useful experience from her friends, and now she is a successful CEO.
Maintaining relationships is another reason why effective communication helps people to succeed. In other words, when people have effective communication, and they can explain their ideas or opinions clearly, so listeners do not get confused. This helps them to understand and believe in each other, which leads to good and stable relationships. As a result, people keep in touch and continue to study and work together in the future which might result in success. For instance, insurance agents are usually able to communicate effectively. They have to have good communication skills, so they can convince costumers to buy insurance and make them believe in the benefits of their company. Therefore, customers keep in contact with their company, which make successful for insurance agents. However, this is not the most important skill people should learn to be successful in today’s society.
Finally, communication skills help people to succeed because individuals who equip themselves with good communication skills usually work more effectively. It is true that when people study communication skills, they can use verbal skills and body language to communicate very well. Therefore, it is easy for people to communicate with their co-workers or customers who cannot speak the same language. Furthermore, studying communication skill, especially body language helps people to present their ideas more clearly and attract audiences’ attention. For example, I presented a presentation about global warming last month, and I used body language and kept eyes contact with my classmates during the present. As a result, my classmates felt excited and paid attention to my presentation, and they asked me questions. That made my presentation successful.
In conclusion, to succeed in the world today, individuals need to have a lot of different skills. However, one of the most important skills is communication skills because this helps people to be more outgoing and make new friend easily, so they can learn a lot of things from their friends and become more successful in their lives. Effective communication not only helps people to keep their relationships longer, but also helps them to work more effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 761, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a result, my classmates felt excited and paid attention to my presentation, and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2990.0 1977.66487455 151% => OK
No of words: 551.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42649727768 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15461372829 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419237749546 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 900.0 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3901494318 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1923076923 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8709677419 211% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176672271475 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579601845008 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687141759858 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103242736914 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550371710245 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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