It is often observed that scholars many times spend a considerable time gathering experience while traveling or indulging into some occupation, a certain set of the population believes that this practice is good for the comprehancial development of the students. However, it is an arguable topic for others, who have a perspective that it can cause the problem only in terms of study, time and money. In this essay, the perks and demerits of this activity will be discussed.
To embark upon, the transition time from school to college is stay crucial for scholars, as it marks a foundation of their future. Further, if a student takes an option to spend some time to gather some practical knowledge by different ventures, then it can enhance the features like self-confidence, value for money and time management. Apart from this, working in any organization can make them aware of the current trend of the industry, moreover, they can learn the skills which need to focus on further studies. In a recent piece of article by the prominent "The Times", around sixty percent of students who spend time in traveling or attain any apprentice, stay more self-motivated and perform their studies and work diligently. Certainly, employers like these feature in their future employment, and certain kind is preferable by the.
On the other hand, several disadvantages are also associated with this activity, the student can lose focus of pursuing post graduation and rather stay connected with their contemporary jobs. Secondly, taking a gap year can make an impact on money, which could be spent on their study and the first year of occupation. In an empirical survey conducted by London's "Oxford University", which ascertained that around thirty-five percent of student forbid their study and continue with their traveling which cost them a lot, and the shortage of money could lead them various detrimental situations. Consequently, it could also be a possibility that they convince to do some criminal activity.
To conclude, a gap year could be beneficial in plethora of means like getting self-confidence, earning money, learning new skills as language, exploring culture and people, many more, Yet, it is inevitable to ignore, how vital this duration is if a juvenile got distracted it can impact adversely on child's future and possible ciminal activities could be done by th
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22797927461 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0193830948 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569948186528 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6304995791 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.230769231 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6923076923 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127956610619 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493319242405 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418611323672 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756052671286 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056203920254 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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