Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The question about taking a break after leaving a school has been widely discussed in recent years. Some people believe that baccalaureates should travel or get labour experience, before they entry the university or college, but other people claim than this time-out has negative aspects. There are arguments on both sides, however, which we will discuss here.
It is unquestionable that the majority of the students after finishing the high school yearn to know the world, learn new languages, visit interesting places and especially to have an independence of their parents. For example, in my personal experience, when I graduated from high school, I travel around the world, and that gave me a lot of experience, for instance, it was the first time I learned to cook, laundry my own clothes, and the most relevant, I learned to solve my own problems. Based on that experience when I entry the university I felt with more confidence and it was easier to manage my life.
On the other hand, making a long recess after high school can be harmful, in particular, the habit of study may be lost and some study skills may be lost and over time you may lose interest in studying. Secondly, entering the university immediately has some benefits, in addiction because students have fresh knowledge, have a routine study and most significant, they can complete a degree yet being very young. Nonetheless, they are still very immature and there is a chance they do not know what they want, therefore address potential problems daily life will be more difficult for them.
As we have seen, there are no easy answers to this question. On balance, however, while there are strong arguments on both sides, the advantages of taking a break before to go to study at university overweight the disadvantages. In line with the above, I completely agree with the statement that students should travel or get a short labour experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce and it was easier to manage my life. On the other hand, making a long recess ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93538461538 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74183025297 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563076923077 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3370653963 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198559778346 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629849470054 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394299455278 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115083076304 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227163275618 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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