You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Tell him which team won
• Describe the conditions on the day
• Say how you felt about the match
Dear Brendan,
Firstly, I would like to know how you feel. I’m sorry I have not written to you earlier. As you remember we played semifinal last Sunday, our team played with the strongest team in the league. I’ll tell you about the game.
In the first quarter of an hour we opened the score, we really played quite well until the break. After the break nobody knows what happened with us, and the other team scored a goal on the 5th minute and the second just 3 minutes after that. Weather was rainy and cloudy, maybe because of that we played disastrously, well like you know we have never played on this conditions. It seemed that match couldn’t be worse, but you can’t imagine what happened next! Resting 10 minutes to the end we were losing 2-1, and our best striker was kicked out. If you remember we never give up and the whole team started playing as never before, on the last breath we made the impossible and withdrew the score thanks to goalkeeper Michael. Finally we won the match by penalty kicks.
All the team is waiting for your recovery; don’t remember we need you on the final!
With best wishes, Rafael
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Brendan, Firstly, I would like to know how you fe...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...l like you know we have never played on this conditions. It seemed that match couldn...
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Line 5, column 739, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...the score thanks to goalkeeper Michael. Finally we won the match by penalty kicks. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63106796117 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28450542343 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9733813442 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7272727273 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276365184994 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126003714567 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805507511702 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18863291057 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100727677424 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.