In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or product from animals such as medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent days, it is widely advocated that people should avoid consuming animal food or animal product like clothing and medicine. In my viewpoint, although this trend could be beneficial in some aspects, human will suffer great loss once we eradicate products derived from animals.
By not using food or product from animals, many positive outcomes can be seen. Firstly, we can preserve the diversity of the species in the wildlife. For instance, rhinos are being hunted savagely just because their horn is somewhat precious for medical purposes, or crocodiles have their skin peeled simply for luxurious, fashionable items like purses or coats. If people keep doing that repetitively, those animals will soon be extinct in the foreseeable future. Secondly, not using food from animals helps people reduce the risk of suffering health problems. People have a tendency to overeat beef, pork, or lamb, which results in such disease like obesity or even some severe heart issues. Therefore, this trend is considered to be useful for human to get rid of negative, unhealthy habits.
On the other hand, despite all the advantages it may bring, I still believe that not using food or product from animals is a flaw decision. First of all, human needs a certain amount of protein for their body to function well, and the best way to get these calories is from animal food. Comparing between a beefsteak and a bowl of salad, it is obvious that the beefsteak contains much more nutrition to be active for a long day. Secondly, animal products, medicine in particular, are the best natural cure for a certain symptom. In Asian countries, like Vietnam, we usually apply snake oil on the injured area so that it can heal faster, or sometimes we consume oil fish to help prevent the brain from aging. In addition, clothing from animals might be a better choice than the man-made ones. Wool clothes, for instance, are usually prominent for their warmth and they have less chance of skin allergy when we wear it. Those are the reasons why we should not eliminate the food or product from animals.
All in all, some people may think that stop using food or product from animals is a great change; however, I disagree that statement since these animals’ products are utterly valuable for humankind.
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- Levels of consumer debt are increasing across the world To address this a new subject should be introduced in secondary school how to manage personal finances Discuss and give your opinion 70
- In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or product from animals such as medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, even so, for instance, in addition, in particular, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9481865285 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46512902782 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572538860104 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6010399429 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300160683601 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10732401874 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875777433514 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213391118947 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342205114154 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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